So much potential here, but the execution is a muddled mess. I couldn't finish this one. I thought I could power through the scatter shot plot and the lack of real character depth, but after taking a break to do Nano, I can't do it. I just can't. Now this isn't to say that this book is a total travesty or anything. Like I said, there is so much potential here. This book read like a first draft. There are things here that would be tightened up or gotten rid of all together after a few more passes by the writer. Unfortunately now that this book has been picked up by a publisher, I doubt that will happen. They'll probably just change the cover, raise the price and be done with it. I only paid .99 for this book. I cannot recommend anyone read it for more than that unless the new version is heavily edited and rewritten.
